very cool
Had a great sound it, not bad for your second work posted on this site at all. hope to hear more from you. if anyone wants to hear 2 collabs Paladin11286 did with me here are the links
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=733616&sub=4579
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http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=733616&sub=2099
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Once again, great song Adam and i hope to hear more non-goa songs from you!
-Steve
Yay the honor of a review from an established NG member...w00t!
this isnt like my song at all
this song is not stolen. the instrumentation and beats are different plus he has a wrong note that shouldve been fixed. so yea, verdict = not guilty
:)
here we go
overall, its a good piece. just needs some minor touchups.
At the beginning, at 0:01, the guitar drops off in volume for a second, dont know why. nothing critical.
your strings could be brought out even more when they come in at 0:03. the strings are also too repetative. mix it up with some new notes. but once again, nothing major.
drums are very good, good samples, good beats. Toms are a little weak and if you added some other percussion to spruce it up, that would be good. maybe some different cymbols, a guiro, or something.
the only thing that really bothered me was the ending and that it was cut off. and if this was final, then im confused.
another part of the song i dislike is the length. 1:20?!!! thats nothing! you could have easily added a solo or 2 in the middle or added a new beat to get rid of the repitition.
Overall, this is a good piece, although some slight inconveniences hinder its score.
For vgmix or ocremix this song would probably score a 60, but since im not either and this IS Newgrounds, its easily in the 80s.
my score - 80/100
Continue to work on music and im sure youll be great!
~HouseMasta
OH SNAP! Everything you said about this man! It's true! I care how harsh it is but it is VERY true! I know that the length is short! I know that the clarity isn't good! I know that it does get repetative! Thats why i didn'y make it any longer man! (=D) But like i said im still a newby to music! I have aALOT more to progress! Now ZENON he he reason! Which I rly wish i had my self but...sadly i don't! Who cares about that though!
Your score 80 out of 100 is V with me man! Your a hardcore reviewer! Thats what i like to see to buddy! I'm your #1 fan of cousre and it will stay like that! No one is gonna replace me!
Well FRIEND(XD)
Keep it V man!
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MUCH better than stage 3-1
Glad i listened to it, good job Zombie!
lol thanks dude
WOW
you have a talent man.
Gimme a buzz if you ever want to discuss audio or something (my AIM is in my profile)
Keep it up!
5/5
-Steve
Thx a lot man it means a lot to me, ill add you tomorow on aim.
good stuff
When I first heard this, I was like WHAT?! Theres a rock song in the trance section? haha. Then i realized that it actually worked very well. You impressed even me - good job ;)
the song has a great beatm and is PERFECT for looping for flash!
Keep the songs coming and if you ever wanna do some more co-op audio files, give me a buzz.
-HouseMasta
Thanks a lot for the review! An updated version of this song will be coming soon. Yeah would def want to do some more co-ops, I loved how that mario ambient mix came out.
good job
Well, it appears I've been the victim of another 0 rapeage in the audio portal.
I am so sick of this too. Any suggestion?
Anyway, enjoyed it, was pretty cool.
Feel free to AIM or email me (check profile)
Wasnt just you man lol, the guy voted 0 on all my songs, even the ones not in the videogame section...hell he had to have voted 0 on my Ice Cap song 4-5 times to take it down from the 4.06 and my She Was Dreaming in the rain song only went up 0.02 when it was voted a 5 which means to take it froma 4.03 to a 3.83 took some work. Poor Bezo also got all his songs massacred by this guy. I think if there were rewards. ie.. exp points for voting on songs and a similar blame thing for music, it would attract so many people that 1 ass voting 0 5-10 times really wouldnt hurt a score to much from what it really deserves. Just like the Flash Portal...
good stuff
The only reason i gave it a 1 for originality is because this is like the 3rd one posted in the past week, (it didnt affect the score though)
Aren't you sick of the voters who randomnly come in and vote 0 on EVERYTHING?! Isnt that so annoying? This is the 3rd time I've gone through this, and to be honest, it makes me almost enraged. (lol)
They should make it a rule that if you want to vote, you have to leave a review, so we know the fools that go around screwing up everything in the audio portal.
Anyway, I enjoyed the song a lot, keep up the good work dude
-Steve
Ya im sick on it....but the person who did this either A. Was on DSL or B. Was on a proxy server which gave him many IP's. The person voted 0 many many many times over on all the songs. The song had a rating of 4.72...at the end it was a 3.80, its gone up to a 3.86 since. All my other songs which were on the front page are long gone now. Only 2 of my songs are on the front now. I made a post about this on the forums. Search "Voting 0" and you should find the topic. A guy said he admitted to doing it for fun. I dont think it was him, just an attention getter. Whoever it was though, wanted to really screw up the vg section to the point where no song was over a 4.00 which in my opinion is ****ed up. I hope the admins on this site care enough about the music section to actually remedy what happend. To bad you cant turn back the clock on all the votes the last 2 days...oh well :(
Outstanding!
For a new and upcoming artist, you really have some skill! I thoroughly enjoyed this song! Nice smooth sound!
If you ever need help with audio or whatever, feel free to AIM me or email me. Anyway, nice job TenchuX
I've been around, just not on this site :D, ty
nice job
I liked it, but there are some problems.
One, the main melody is almost drowned out or muffled to hear it.
two, the other tracks seem too reverbish, or it could be me. Try to rid of some of the underwaterness. (unless u wanted to sound that way)
three, this is me, but if ure doing like a salsa remix, the melody has to be a sh** load faster and more upbeat, cuz it sounds like slowed down elevator music. Other than that, good job (except it needed a better ending)
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