MAC Oct Christmas Review
This is the MAC Oct Christmas Review for your Song "This is Christmas."
First off, congrats on making a Vocal Song. i enjoy hearing some lyrics in NG.
ok, onto the review
The piano at the beginning was too loud an obnoxious for my liking, it needs to be work on.
secondly, the main voice was drowned out by the piano and the whole song. it needs to be brought out desperately as i had a hard time of hearing him. the guitar also distorts the song a little when it comes in.
the instruments you used were all fine, but you need to master the volumes. the piano was WAY too loud along with the guitar. i couldn't hear the main vocals so thats going to slaw me to not give you a higher score.
im assuming you made up the lyrics, so thats pretty sweet.
and as a Christmas song, year i could see myself listening to this if you finalized it.
OK, time to the nitty gritty
10/10 Originality - all you? 10/10
7.0/10 Clarity - couldnt hear the main vocals and the piano high notes drowned out everything
9.3/10 Diversity - Classical i guess, but i would have submitted it to Pop
10/10 Effort - sounded like you worked on it
9.8/10 Appeal - i wish i could understand the lyrics
9.0/10 My overall score. the vocals sounded on key but as I've said many times, i just couldn't hear them as it was drowned out.
Adjusted MAC Overall Score - 85.3
this song would have been SO much better if the volumes were worked out.
~HouseMasta~